Bobby you got a really good song here. You gotta watch out for those vocals though, you dont want it to overpower the melody and beat. Definitely the vocals stand out more than the beat and the melody. Try and lower the vocals and try to somehow blend the vocals in with the melody. Can't really explain how, but I hope this review would help. Just keep the melody and beat your foundation first and dont let the vocals stand out too much. It's good to have, but when there is too much or when it stands out especially this song because this song is more of a chill vibe you dont want too much dynamics from the vocal. Good luck bro, and we gotta make a legit crew one day.
I like how your starting to experiment now. keep going and you should start investing on building a studio someday. With these kinds of songs, you can definitely use an MC. I should invest in a mic and equipment too, cuz you inspiring me to produce music and write lyrics again.
Here we go now!!!!! Bobby you gettin it! Hella dope on this one. The Low Voice is nice too, cept that it creeps the hell out of me. But the Beat was nnnnnnnnnnnnniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii iiiiiiiicccccccccccccccccccccccccceee eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.
Yo thanks man, I really appreciate it since this is my first time chopping a sample to a great extent so I'm glad ya like it. (and yes that voice is hella fucking creepy)
I'm Liking this,
But one thing, You should start off your songs with a simple beat in the beginning
and fade a bit, hit a simple "Bass drum then snare" (Boom-chi) beat and then go into the main beat. I can't explain it so I'll try an tell you at school. Just try it out on like any of your songs. Basics of variation. I'm not forcing you to do this, just a tip: you gotta experiment a lot in producing music. Do different stuff each time and see how you like it. Very chill song man. Loving the mellow beat and melody on this one.
Wow, Nice Bobby,
It's gettin real serious with your music now
Each and every song you make and produce it's getting better each time.
Just need to work on variations for the song
whether it be the beat that changes or the melody, its all up to you.
This beat was hella fresh, and this melody was dope,
It was the samething throughout the song, so just add something a bit more
Be more a bit Dynamic. Loud and soft parts.
unique, although this song, by far is my favorite right now.
I'm kinda happy you didnt a lot of voice samples in this.
overall, This is great, you're starting off really good right now.
Can't wait til you become big. (hopefully in the underground lol)
10 out of 10.
Good job Bro, proud of you on this one.
Your the best, man I appreciate the kind words and especially the criticisms man. Thanks a million for an awesome review :)
I Like This But
Sup Bobby, This is a dope song. You need more beat variety, It's the same beat throughout the song, so you should change it up a little, but not too much. Overall, well done on the song, just needs a bit more variety that's all, samples fine. Well done mang.
This is so Legit.
Dude this is one of my favorites from you. Dope Beat, Dope Old School Sample that no one heard of. Beat + the Melody = the Recipe. This song just needs to get longer and have more diversity in it. Maybe someone can rap to this, Overall this song is great. Well done Task. Upcoming Producer.
Oh shit! James whats good man. You should post your art on this site, people are really cool and its a good sense of community. It's a great way to get your shit rated by peers. Thank you so much for the review too man.
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